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Starting Overby ~AguaRush11

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Edit: not bad for a few hours of work.

So. My file is dead. Done for. Never to be opened again. So I am starting over. This time I'm not waiting to submit updates.

I could use suggestions. / Critiques/ Advice.

I know things need to be fixed. I am leaving this alone for a few days. I drew it when I was very angry.

Any redline tips would also be appreciated.

*hangs head*

I think this pose is better than the last... but still sad to lose the file.

This is a commission. work in progress
©2012-2013 ~AguaRush11
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*Night-Anders Dec 26, 2012  Student General Artist
I like that the new version has a more dynamic pose. Who knows? Maybe this one will turn out even better than the other which died ^^.
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~AguaRush11 Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! i hope so!
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~SiberiumAbyss Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist
(Sorry, I'm a little lazy for commenting right now. x.x' ) I'm really sorry to hear about your most recent piece having been lost. :( I know it's going to be painstaking trying to reconstruct the image, but at least you'll have the experience to correct the flaws, and even as a simple colour sketch right now, it's looking great already! ^_^ Anyway, just take a few days to diffuse a little anger, and you'll be able to progress again. :)
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~AguaRush11 Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks a lot. i hope it turns out well
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~Bluehasia Dec 26, 2012
after every time i lost a file for a project on the pc. im frustrated but in the long run most of the time it comes out better than the one i lost :)
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~AguaRush11 Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks blue! i hope thats true for me
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~ShalomShiloh Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist
I am sad to hear about it. But at least a positive improvement came out of it and you have cleaner ideas.

Here is what I see that you can think about:
- The front-right looks like it's bent inward some. For example, the elbow and the foot's angles.
- The dragon's mouth at the back ("cheek" area?) add that stretchy membrane thing on the inside of the cheek.
Refer to this to see what I mean: [Dragon Mouth]

Sorry, that's all I can think of right now until you show another update. I really hope stuff works out good for you this time.
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~AguaRush11 Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! i really appreciate it
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